tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.comments2012-01-23T23:24:28.063-05:00Kate W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15498910344690088987noreply@blogger.comBlogger413125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-45946594759380726282011-06-19T10:40:48.658-04:002011-06-19T10:40:48.658-04:00

I thought this was well funny! Loved the ending!

Mariabardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08721159297088972199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-57290953308162676032011-06-11T12:51:33.988-04:002011-06-11T12:51:33.988-04:00

I really like this poem!

C. Wayne Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16634882840901283686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-60834393016352103872011-06-08T21:15:02.801-04:002011-06-08T21:15:02.801-04:00

I love the dark tone of this one, by far my favorite.

Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-55355543803747531872011-05-22T12:08:32.373-04:002011-05-22T12:08:32.373-04:00

Lovely poem! High-time the loser prince realised this!

Yaminihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14133956192466067790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-59695945154350096922011-03-05T20:44:24.613-05:002011-03-05T20:44:24.613-05:00

Wish I&#39;d have thought up the name Jazz Sexton! I could really make that sell! <br /><br />Good writing, too. R.Way

rwayfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14272989271122074706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-23577635166579856652011-03-05T20:39:32.168-05:002011-03-05T20:39:32.168-05:00

Especially cool, since the perspective was male and the writer, female! Nice work, and some of the heaviest lifting there is in the biz! R.Way

rwayfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14272989271122074706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-64226114062651722752011-03-05T20:36:11.391-05:002011-03-05T20:36:11.391-05:00

I thought this was among the most innovative adaptations here. My kind of humor, too! R.Way

rwayfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14272989271122074706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-84351289085295075802011-03-05T20:33:18.495-05:002011-03-05T20:33:18.495-05:00

At 3377 words, this is longer than I expected to find. It IS interesting and makes two good fairy tales into one. I know how hard it is to quit when you&#39;ve got a head of steam up!<br /><br />The magical twist at the end was appropriate, as well! R.Way

rwayfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14272989271122074706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-80690278648941718542011-03-05T20:14:41.167-05:002011-03-05T20:14:41.167-05:00

Gonna&#39; be hard to compete with the wit and charm of stories like the poem of Amanda Davis!<br /><br />I&#39;ll see what I can do!<br />R. Way

rwayfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14272989271122074706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-39868505132379344332011-02-26T18:37:44.226-05:002011-02-26T18:37:44.226-05:00

Love the imagery: &quot;through eyes blackened with wet<br />glitter of regret.&quot; Moira

moiranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-61879900109640770412011-01-18T21:00:01.691-05:002011-01-18T21:00:01.691-05:00

love it!

Casshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07912460196118694753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-60648726762242743842011-01-12T19:43:20.084-05:002011-01-12T19:43:20.084-05:00

This is a lovely poem.

Andrea Blythehttp://www.andreablythe.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-4838290522533173602011-01-04T19:49:58.088-05:002011-01-04T19:49:58.088-05:00

love the title!

Wynnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04809869881096185381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-63692897417904009502010-12-07T17:02:55.006-05:002010-12-07T17:02:55.006-05:00

There are several things that I like about this specific retelling about Hansel and Gretel. One is that it is more relatable when compared to the original tale. There is a car mentioned in this story whereas Hansel and Gretel is in a time where there is no technology. Another thing that makes this story relatable is that the characters names are not so old fashioned. The names still make the

Pawlutohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11646492970173073336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-78329069340306012892010-11-08T10:28:17.385-05:002010-11-08T10:28:17.385-05:00

this is awesome.

whaddayameandoihaveroomfordesserthttp://whaddayameandoihaveroomfordessert.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-76787829136229425802010-11-07T17:31:59.406-05:002010-11-07T17:31:59.406-05:00

I love your idea of the aftermath of the folktale, really interesting! :D

Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-13694863598957344842010-11-07T15:36:27.602-05:002010-11-07T15:36:27.602-05:00

Very cool-- a funny and scary take on the classic!

Wynnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04809869881096185381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-45842944984225841702010-11-03T12:49:56.859-04:002010-11-03T12:49:56.859-04:00

Our thoughts are with you and your sister. Here&#39;s hoping she gets better quickly.

Erichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09440250912113010049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-45069691565214051892010-11-03T08:28:08.320-04:002010-11-03T08:28:08.320-04:00

Sorry to hear about your sister, but glad that she&#39;s doing better!

Sam Valentinohttp://art-sam-ples.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-84052259817948718992010-10-31T22:20:36.250-04:002010-10-31T22:20:36.250-04:00

That is very scary indeed. Take care of her, and yourself, and get to this when you can. I hope she recovers quickly and completely.

Ben Langhinrchshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-88345574704659491122010-10-31T18:27:19.094-04:002010-10-31T18:27:19.094-04:00

Wishing your sister a quick and complete recovery.

Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-45895151456787512022010-10-31T17:48:26.127-04:002010-10-31T17:48:26.127-04:00

I am so sorry. Don&#39;t worry about being &quot;late,&quot; not a problem! I hope she will be okay!

Wynnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04809869881096185381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-24551232751707945472010-10-29T17:22:38.085-04:002010-10-29T17:22:38.085-04:00

please do keep us posted. I could not do without my EC.<br /><br />masterymistery at <a href="http://cosmic-rapture.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">cosmic rapture</a>

masterymisteryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15844831221838590812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-73586447019570697112010-10-22T19:58:38.719-04:002010-10-22T19:58:38.719-04:00

This is beautiful, Ashley. I can feel the emotion.

Wynnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04809869881096185381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4554146110204064313.post-6415598984254335312010-10-13T16:55:30.350-04:002010-10-13T16:55:30.350-04:00

I just found your site through a newsletter. It really is an enchanting idea and a wonderful outlet for those of us who love to weave fairy tales. <br /><br />When is your next deadline and what will be the theme? I would love to submit a story to it.

thewritechrishttp://thewritechris.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com